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Music Drabbles 1

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Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist

"Unforgivable Sinner" - Lene Marlin

Swallowing back grief, Al pushes open the door and sees the shadow of what once was his brother, sitting slumped on the floor in a sea of books and alchemic formulas and half-completed (half-hoped) human transmutation circles - maps charted to nowhere to find the missing piece of them that can no longer be found.

"Ed?" He calls his name softly, steps into the study and drops to his knees in front him, silently begging his big brother to look up, to come back him, to remember how to live.

"I never told her," says Edward, in a voice as empty as his eyes. "She waited, and waited, but I never told her and she...she never knew, and now she's gone and it's...too late to say it." A sudden, unexpected wave of pain crashes through the numbness and he chokes on tears that won't come. "She never knew I loved her."

"Brother, it's alright." Alphonse blinks back his own tears and reaches out to squeeze Ed's shoulder in fervent reassurance. "She did know. She did, I promise."

"How do you know?" Edward lifts his head at last. Their eyes meet, and Al manages a small smile.

"Because I told her."

~ and now she's up there
sings like an angel
but you can't hear those words ~


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"Blah Blah Blah" - Rockapella

Ed wakes up from a long, deeply satisfying nap and hears his brother and Winry snickering from the seat across from him. The train screeches to a noisy halt and he winces. "Didn't need that eardrum, anyway," he grumbles, stifling a yawn and sitting up to stretch his arms.

The snickering increases.

"What?" he demands, shooting a suspicious glare at them. Alphonse hastily hides something behind his back. Winry just points and giggles even harder. Confused and irritated, Edward turns to look out the window - and sees his own face staring back at him from the glass, covered in big, black, scrawling doodles. The offending marker drops to the floor as Al and Winry collapse against each other in howling laughter, immensely pleased with themselves.

Until Edward picks it up, grinning devilishly, and pulls the cap off with a sinister pop.

"Al?" Winry whispers, inching out of her seat. "Do you think we should run now?"

~ why you wanna go and do me like you do?
why you wanna beat me blue? ~


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"Vanilla Twilight" - Owl City

I wish you were here. Edward signs his name at the bottom, carefully folds the letter and slips it in an envelope, along with a picture of him soaked in seawater and grinning broadly next to his latest adventure: a great white shark, three times his size, hanging high and ready for the upcoming feast. He addresses the back of the envelope slowly, as if to savor the destination he's sending it to; then leans back in his chair with a sigh and gazes out at the starry night, and wonders if she's looking up at it too.

A week later, Winry runs to the mailbox as if her life depends on it, yanks it open and fumbles with the contents inside, blue eyes scanning them all over for the one name she yearns to see. A tiny laugh of delight escapes her lips when she finds it; and she hugs the envelope to her chest, just for a moment, before she tears it open to drink in what's inside.

~ I'd send a postcard to you, dear
'cause I wish you were here ~
Songs:

"Unforgivable Sinner" by Lene Marlin - [link]
"Blah Blah Blah" by Rockapella - [link]
"Vanilla Twilight" by Owl City - [link]

I was on fullmetal-alchemist.com, and someone shared this really fun writing exercise on the forums:

-Take your iPod/mp3 player/itunes/what have you, and put it on shuffle.
-For the songs that come up, write a drabble. Let the music inspire you. Don't think about it too much, and don't edit. This is just to get you writing.
-Write for the duration of the song: No more, No less.
-Post your drabbles! Be sure to include which songs you wrote each one to.


So I cued up one of my FMA playlists and tried my hand at it, and this is the result. Sometimes I bend the rules a little bit, but hey, it's the general idea that counts, right? I know these drabbles are rough, but...well...they're kind of supposed to be. So please be gentle with the feedback, lol. :XD: (Hope you enjoyed them a little, at least...)

It's lots of fun and VERY addicting, so I'll most likely be posting more, and trying it out with other fandoms too. (I've got some lovely possibilities for Narnia in my head...)
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Ooh, I like these drabbles. :D

And that's a great idea. I may try it sometime.